I Want To Break Free

[SilverBeat]

[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]My August 2017 song is "I Want To Break Free" Please let me know what you think.
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[/FONT][FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]https://www.reverbnation.com/silverbeat/song/28501802-i-want-to-break-free
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[FONT=&quot]Cheers,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Terry[/FONT][/FONT]

 

[arbux]

Hi Terry. Great vocals and song. I absolutely understand if it's the style you intended but my preference would be to get a little lift in the bass and merge the drums in a little. I don't know how to describe it in mixing terms (noob), but the stereo effect through the track is a little distracting to me when listening in my headphones. However, it definitely sounds like a live and human recording and not a robotic track as a result.

(Thinking it through, it sounds like the drums are stereo-width based rather than panned for the different parts of the drum kit - is that correct? I'm still tuning my ears to hear the differences)

- arbux