Life Is Very Short

[SilverBeat]

"Life Is Very Short" is my June 2017 song. I completed The lyrics and the Tune, The completeinstrument[FONT=arial, helvetica] performance,[/FONT][FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif] Vocals, Engineering [/FONT][FONT=arial, helvetica]and mixing. Please feel free to [/FONT]hit on any thing.​

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[FONT=arial, helvetica]Cheers,[/FONT]​

[FONT=arial, helvetica]Terry[/FONT]​

Life Is Very Short


Baby, do you wanna have fun
Dance beneath the moon lite sky
Share a dream and fantasize it's real
Take a trip to Shangri La
Stay the night and do what we feel

Chorus

Life is very short
Let's take the day off
We can blast our way off right now
Why waste any thought
Let's take the day off
And don't even wonder how

Repeat Chorus

Baby, do you wanna have fun
Fly above all life's lows
We could chill in Kokomo or Rome
Float down stream to paradise
Than we take the long way home

Nothing Really matters
But the fun we share tonight - well all right

Repeat Chorus

 

[Matt]

Thanks for sharing. Good over all song structure, I like the melodies also. The mix is rather mono toned, if that makes sense, it is laking definition/separation of the elements.

I do like the song.

 

[RottingSerpent]

Sounds like an ABC song lol but I liked the piano solo